Let's Go The spring sun shines My dog is hopeful She noses at my keys But there isn't time. My dog is hopeful The tail is wagging But there isn't time "Let's go," her eyes plead. The tail is wagging She noses at my keys "Let's go," her eyes plead. The spring sun shines.
This week’s Poetry Friday is hosted by Susan at Soul Blossom Living.
Oh, those puppy dog eyes are so hard to resist when they want you to do something. I love the repetition as it shows how persistent pups can be.
Thank you. Yes, I agree — the pantoum structure really worked well for this subject.
Hope there’s time soon!
What a cute pup! (I think I have the only dog in the world who will actually dive under a sofa to avoid going for a walk.)
Wow, that’s pretty unusual!
Oh so hopeful pup! Nice repetition
Those puppy eyes – how can you say no to her she is waiting so quietly there for you? Hope it was a good walk!
Interesting repetition in your poem. I hope (for your puppy’s sake) that you got outside!
It’s so hard to deny one’s faithful companion!
Piper pretty much runs this place. Who can resist that face?